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Alien Tourist by Zage56

:icontarpalsfan:
I love your ORIGINAL, unique charecters and worlds. Therefore I give you 5 stars on originality. You deserve every star. :clap:
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Vision? How could you score less here? This is your world and your charecters. You of course know how they should look. Who could say otherwise?
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Your penwork is great. I envy your inking and stippling skills. I do not know how you could could improve on this drawing!
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Impact? Here again, what could you do to make this stand out more? I don't know. The figure draws the viewers eye. She is pleasing and interesting to look at. The back and forground provide the perfect 'frame' to make her stand out.
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By the way, you don't always work in color. When you do, the colors are wonderful, and do not distract.
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I can't see any weak spots in this drawing. In my humble opinion, it is GREAT.
Thanks for creating this, and asking for a critique. I hope you get many a critique on this great piece.
By the way, I am not just being nice. This is an honest critique. It is what you deserve!
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Zage56 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Thanks for your honest critique, Kath! :hug:
Trying to be original and unique is important to me. My art and this story is something I have been working on for a very long time. :work:
This colouring technique is something I used to do allot of when I painted. I stippled with paint and ink. Paint was a fun way to create a design stippled with colour. I thought I would try stipple colouring with my markers. I was pleased with that colour experiment. :painter:
I see allot of weaknesses in my own work. I believe we all notice things we would want to correct in our own finished art. My critical eye is always looking for perfection (something I know I will never obtain) in my art. It is good for all of us to strive for that "perfection"(and NOT be discouraged). Work on the best art we can create. :w00t!:
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tarpalsfan Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
You are welcome. I wouldn't think of giving you a critique that wasn't an honest one. Flowers are nice, but not much good in a critique. Unless you did a drawing of a flower...and you didn't;)
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I understand what you mean when you talk about 'seeing' weakness in your own artwork. I think that is probably a good thing, most of the time. I am glad that you don't think that an artist can reach perfection. Perfection can be a goal, but maybe a stop sign too. I don't know. :)
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Zage56 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Artistic perfection is an unattainable goal. Much like chasing after a rainbow. We work at improving our art, trying to "perfect" what we create. The work never seem enough. I do have allot of epiphanies while I try to grow my talent. Much like I grab little vapors of skill, but I never possess that rainbow.
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tarpalsfan Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
I agree with you. :nod: I am glad though, what would be left if we really could reach perfection. There wouldn't be much left to strive for. :)
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